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Friday, May 29, 2009

Out of Touch, Out of Time - Epilogue

July 11, 2008

Jonas set the newspaper on the table. They'd checked into the hotel the afternoon before after they'd finished with the police and fire departments. That had then been followed by making the rounds to the insurance company and mall to buy clothing and necessities, as Cheyenne put it.

He frowned at the paper. Just as he’d suspected, the reason for Cheyenne’s death appeared on the 11th. When he couldn’t find anything beforehand, he knew that would be the case.

“Hey, what’s the frown for?”

He smiled at her as she sat cross-legged on the bed. She was so beautiful and he was so grateful she was alive and his.

He sat on the bed and pulled her against him. “I always suspected I’d find the reason for your death in today’s paper.”

She shuddered, “If you hadn’t have been here to change my life, I would’ve been in the house when it blew up. I’m sure that’s why I landed in your time dead.”

She was silent for a moment before she continued, “Oh, while you were in the shower, the Police Chief called.”

“Did he say what’d caused the fire? The paper said faulty wiring.”

“That’s what the Chief said. Apparently, the fire inspector believes the wiring in the basement was frayed and the fire started in the wall down there. Then when it spread, it caused the cans of stripper to explode and that in turn may have ruptured the gas line for my stove and furnace, they need to do more testing or something like that before they know for sure. The end result: a really big boom and a lot of fire.” She frowned, “Kaltenback was telling the truth, he didn’t start my house on fire. The fact that I hadn’t gotten around to getting it rewired did.”

He held her for a few minutes, just happy as hell to be with her in any time, but especially this time.

As though she’d read his mind, she said, “Oh, that reminds me, I emailed an old friend of mine from London last night and he’s working on getting all the credentials you’re going to need.”

“What kind of credentials?”

“A birth certificate, a driver’s license, a social security number, and a credit history. Oh, and he also said he could get you a degree from any university in England. I told him I wanted Oxford, so you’re getting a degree in horticulture from Oxford.”

“Oxford? Even I’ve heard of Oxford,” he said with a smile.


“Figured you had.” She turned and rising on her knees took his face in her hands. “I love you Jonas Salinger, and thank you for coming into my life and saving it.”

***

Changes in Cheyenne's timeline:

Before Jonas:
Mark bullied Cheyenne until she agreed to take a dozen uninspired photographs, which she put together and sent over to the Gallery without leaving her house any more than absolutely necessary. She was in her kitchen on the morning of the 10th, heading out to her soon to be renovated garden when the explosion occurred. She entered the time rift at a point where she landed on the 10th, but later in the day than when the accident occurred. Jonas that day was in the front of the house and stepped back into the time rift at a different point, bringing him to the future ten days earlier, in time to save her.

After Jonas:
Mark bullied Cheyenne until she agreed to do the show, but this time, Jonas inspired her and she went into parts of town she didn’t the first time looking for just the perfect shots. She ventured out and took chances in places she wouldn’t normally have gone. Therefore, she was in the right spot to take the picture of Kaltenback this time around.

Because Jonas was in her life, and they discovered the photograph, and Jonas knew she was destined to die, she was not in the same place at the same time as she had been before. The explosion still happened as it had before, but she was in front of the house, not inside it.

One thing I did to show things had changed between the two timelines was I purposely dressed Cheyenne different. When she went back to Jonas’ time, she was barefoot and very much dressed for staying home. This time, she was dressed to go out. :)

Because of Jonas coming to the present, Kaltenback was caught and stopped before he could continue taking money and letting drugs remain on the street. The changes made with Kaltenback’s immediate life and the people who buy and sell the drugs, would affect many people in one way or the other.

Jonas’ coming to the present not only saved Cheyenne and gave her love; it very well may have saved many other lives as well, thus causing ripples in the timeline possibly for generations.

I hope this answers most of your questions. Thank you so much for reading.
-Lachesis

Chapter
Twenty-Six

16 comments:

Penelope said...

Sweetest. Thing. EVAR!

Lachesis said...

Thank you, Pen! It just really needed closure. :)

S.B. said...

Absolutely charming! I loved this from beginning to epilogue!

Lachesis said...

S.B. Thank you! I loved doing it, and I think I'm really going to miss Jonas. :)

~Drew said...

I am going to miss Jonas as well, he was such a romantic hero in every sense of the word.

The epilogue was the icing on an already delicious cake! Great story Lachesis!

Gayl said...

Perfect bow to the ribbon you wrapped around the story. Romantic and sweet!

cheripye said...

The entire story from start to finish was well written, suspensful and romantic and sweet! but the epilogue is truly what wonderful, They are together forever. 80)

Emily said...

What a fabulous story. This really summed everything up well too. I adore that he got to stay here with her and that they found love together. *sigh* Such a great romantic tale and with a really bizarre twist of time, although I thought it was very original and unique! This ending has left me all warm and fuzzy inside, well done Lachesis!

Veron said...

HAPPY ENDINGS YARRR! I'm glad you closed it out this way and gave us a bit of insight on the future. Jonas is gonna be normal! Hehe.

Lachesis said...

Drew, thank you! Yup, it was all those over-sweet roses we all love to eat. LOL I love the alpha heroes, no doubt, but the beta can be such a sweetie and a Victorian hero for sure.

Thank you Gayl! It so needed it. I had originally thought an abrupt ending would work, until I saw it. Then I knew, not at all.

Thank you cheripye! They would have made it in any time since Cheyenne was a photographer, but Jonas was just too perfect for now. I'm such a mushy romantic, but it has to have a bit of suspense thrown in. :D

Ah, Emily, I love warm fuzzies. And I'm such a hopeful romantic. Time travel, romance and suspense, all my favorites. You know, there's someone for everyone somewhere, or sometime. They just have to come together. :D

Veron (finally, I got your name right, so sorry, I can be such a ditz. :p) Thank you! You know, it bugged me that he was without all those little things we can't live without, such as a social security number, I just had to wrap it up neatly. Now, if my desk could just be as neat. :D

Saoz said...

Looks like Cheyenne knows the right sort of people! With money comes privilege. :P

Wonderful wrap-up to a wonderful story. :)

Lachesis said...

Hey Saoz, I figured she'd lived all over the world, she had to meet all sorts of people along the way. Good and bad. :D And, of course, they would come in handy eventually. :D

Thank you so very much, I loved doing it, and I'm going to miss it.

S@ndy said...

Awwww !!!!!
I'm so happy for both of them!! I really wish they will be soo happy together!!!

I fell in love with your characters!!! they were so true to themselves and so unique, love romantic Jonas and I'm sure going to miss the beautiful Cheyenne!!

Wonderful story from beginning to end!! It was all fantastic!!!

Thank you for such a wonderful read!!!!
I'm really looking forward to read more from you....
for now I'm going to head over to Sea of Moons!!!

Lachesis said...

Thank you so much S@ndy! I really fell in love with them, too. Funny, looking back today I realize I really miss them. I'm such a sucker for a good romance - and I just can't leave my love of the genre behind.

And you're welcome, I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it. :D

goodbye_sun said...

Awww. You have such a light hand with building up the tension in the storyline and the characters relationship, knowing just how much to give us to keep us going. Thanks for sharing this with us, and congrats on finishing, it must feel great!

Lachesis said...

Thank you, Goodbye_sun that's a wonderful complement. *gulp* Now I'm going to worry about trying to do it again. ;D

You're welcome, it was a story I loved telling, and yes, finishing it was a great feeling of accomplishment. Both in terms of story and Simming it.